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Offline el reb 7chich

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Black sword beast AMV made by el reb
« on: October 23, 2014, 06:51:27 PM »
Hello i made this trailer my self,wanted to share it with u, askin for feedbacks so i can improve my work ^^ :beast:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOZPg3URVGg
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Re: black sword beast AMV made by el reb ,
« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2014, 07:29:06 PM »
Very nice editing.  You managed to fit quite a bit in here.  My main critique would be to lose those specialty transitions that appear earlier on.  No one in the industry really uses them and they stand out especially because the aspect ratio is moving with it.  I'd also go a little lighter on the color correction as some of the shots have Griffith's entire face blown out to white.  Otherwise, it's a nice job.  Cut well to the music as well

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Re: black sword beast AMV made by el reb ,
« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2014, 09:42:14 PM »
and very nice feedback , as it seems u took ur while to see what are the real problems of that video,i do know my self that the contrast problem is real in some frames , and i lost my transitions since my plugin refused to work in the editing process , i ve been using an old plugin to help me with the effects now am using magic bullet , and i am preparing for something new ^^ thank u pal
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Re: Black sword beast AMV made by el reb
« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2014, 12:42:55 PM »
Sometimes the hardest part of making a great amv is the confines of your program.  Get so far along and then realize that split second transition that looks good doesn't smooth over when you finalize.   Happy you found the site I mentioned.    :serpico:

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Re: Black sword beast AMV made by el reb
« Reply #4 on: October 24, 2014, 02:48:07 PM »
I don't care for many AMVs, but I really like the kinetic feel you achieved through the edits.
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Re: Black sword beast AMV made by el reb
« Reply #5 on: October 24, 2014, 06:31:00 PM »
thank u man , i appreciate it ^^
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