serpicoo's wallpapers

hi to everyone,i am new here and i loved this site,i wanted to subbmit my wallpapers in this site to let you guys see it & give me a honest comment.
hope everyone will like it :)
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/9330/scherkiehousewi3.jpg

Hey Sepicoo, thanks for contributing.

Its a solid start, but I think it still needs work. I'd say the flat tones applied to each object need areas of increased saturation and shade to pop out a little more.

Guts and Company need color too. It looks a bit odd with them in black and white.

Overall everything is sort of washed out and lacking in any shading. Where's the light coming from? Above? To the side? Shade accordingly.

Keep at it. This is a tough panel.

thanks :) glad to hear that,yeah i think it's still needs some work but i think i will make this wall better later because right now i am working on another wallpaper.

Interesting coloration. I really like the soft to your style. Hope to see more as you improve.