First to panels look great... If ha could convert the hatching into gradient... well, that would help the last panel tons... if ya try for it, be care ful not to overdo it though, some of that hatching creates direction, and removeing all of it would obliterate the blowing out effect
I had to put a lot of effert into making the first two panels look good considering how bright and gritty it was, then I saw the last one and was like, "I might just call it a night and do it later." So I guess I'll do it sometime today. Thanks for the idea Majin. Hey, at least I remembered it was at night.